God

With your little finger

You poked,

A gentle nudge,

And

We fell,

A string of dominoes,

Flat

On our faces,

Grovelling,

Praying,

Was it fun for you?

Did

Our insignificance

Make you proud?

Did

You feel

God enough?

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9 thoughts on “God

      1. Yeah It was frustration all along. Until i reached the last line which has a strong hint of sarcasm. But then thats the beauty of poetry. So many interpretations! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  1. I loved this. Nothing more.

    Is this a style of poetry TGND like Haiku? No matter what, I loved every word and that last line – You feel God enough? ——

    Can’t love this enough.

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