The new moon
Peeps out
Shy, as if,
From behind fluffy clouds,
A new wife
Flushed with new love
Anxious
For her beloved to get home.
PS: The moon was looking SO beautiful yesterday night that I couldn’t help but ogle at her all the way back home from work. Neither could I resist penning this down. 🙂
Beautiful, crisp, fresh lines! Simple yet profound.
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@Ajay
Thank you! Glad you liked it! 🙂
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lovely lines!
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@Reema
Thank you, Reema! 🙂
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The moon sure was very beautiful… 🙂
How come you did not put up its pic here??
😉
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@Visha
I would have loved to! Unfortunately, my camera does not take very good pictures of the moon. Let’s just say pics from my camera do not do justice to the beauty of the moon in reality. 😦
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Awww! thats so lovely
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@R’s Mom
Thank you! 🙂
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this is amazing-my friends call me weird for having fallen in love with the moon…thought i was alone till i read this:-):-)
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@Weirduh
Oh, you definitely aren’t alone. 🙂
Thank you!
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Can you delete the previous comment???
wanted to comment earlier too..this WP is acting up..i don’t like to sign in with my WP username for the simple reason that I don’t use that account..hmpf!
now about this post: lovely! I too noticed the lovely moon and your lovely poem just did full justice to its beauty..:-)
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@Uma
Thank you, Uma! Welcome to my blog! 🙂
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Beautiful!
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@Jaclyn
Thank you! 🙂
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You are super talented! I am so impressed with your writing skills.
Hope you have a great weekend!
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@Ameena
Thank you for the kind words, Ameena! Your comment sure made my day, and my weekend. 🙂
Welcome to my space!
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good one. i too am fascinated by the moon. infact there was a lunar eclipse a few months ago and i wrote a poem about it. do check it out. here is the link
http://arjun1097.wordpress.com/2011/12/10/the-game-of-shadows/
thanks 🙂
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@Arjun Sharma
Thank you! Welcome to my blog! 🙂
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Very lovely poem.
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@Suko
Thanks, Suko! 🙂
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Very nice and I totally agree with the gorgeous appearance of the moon tonight 🙂
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@My Era
Thank you! 🙂
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